Love the mouth viewpoint
I think the ending shot (where he's eating himself) is probably the weakest visual in the entire piece. Its too repetitive and clunky. Otherwise the rest of the short is great, especially the mouth point of view nom action, that was fantastic. Your gore style reminds me of Metalocalypse which is a good thing.
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